Class Novel:
Chapter 5 by Seth Sillmon
Author’s Note:
With this chapter I wanted to start prepping for filming and get the ball
rolling. I wanted to introduce her crew and possible filming locations. I also
wanted to give a little more information on the incident with her brother and
how it has motivated her to tell this story. Hope you enjoy.
Chapter
5
Nat
awoke the next morning to a monstrous engine roaring outside her hotel window.
It was the sound of a jet airliner beginning to land on that small runway strip
that was near her hotel. She checked her phone to see that it had preceded the
alarm she had set by almost 2 hours. It was a quarter to 7, so she decided to
get an earlier start on her day. She got out bed to stretch and instantly felt
an uneasiness rumbling in her stomach. She covered her lips and had scurried to
the toilet and began to purge the contents of her stomach. The sickness had
been going on for some time now since she began the medication to counteract
the testing, but the morning sickness had only been going on for a few weeks.
But it was beginning to seem routine to her, so she wasn’t startled. She
proceeded to shower and get ready to leave for the day. She sat on her bed
lacing her sneakers up and flipping through her checklist she wanted to
complete for the day. She grabbed her Notebook, back-pack, and Cannon camera
back and headed for the door. She paused and pulled out a small photo from her
front left pocket in her coat. It was a picture of her and her brother Nathan
they took together 2 months before he went missing.
She
walked out her room and ran to the elevator to try and catch it before it went
down to the first floor. A small tan arm reached out to stop the door from
closing. Nat boarded the elevator and one of the cleaning ladies was on board
doing her morning runs through the second floor.
“Thank you,” Nat
said to the woman.
“What floor?”
the woman asked.
“First, please.”
When
Nat got down to the first floor, the smell of coffee filled the air. A small
child began to dance in her mind. She approached Eugene at the front desk to
ask him about the coffee.
“Excuse me,
where is the coffee? It smells really good,” Nat said.
“Huh?” Eugene
said puzzled.
“Coffee? Do you
guys have any? I smell it,” Nat said.
“Oh that in our
office, it’s for employees only. But there is a fuel station a few blocks into
town that sells it until all day,” Eugene said.
Nat
sighed and walked away asking herself why she didn’t pay closer attention to
the reviews on this hotel before she booked it. Luckily she was properly
dressed for long walking and hiking in the windy climate. It took her about
half a mile to walk to the store that was near the town. She grabbed a small
coffee, a few granola bars, and a bottle of water for her trip. She sat in a
small booth near the window and pulled out her notebook.
“First stop, The
Church of the Holy Ascension.”
It
was the church that Nat passed on her way to the hotel. She had researched it
back at her hotel room to discover that it was actually a lot more famous that
she had thought it was. She figured it would give her some great shots in Act
II of her script. There was also an Enterprise car rental service a block away,
and Nat knew that she would need some other form of transportation in Alaska,
other than hiking. Nat made her way to Enterprise after she left the fuel
station, and rented a Chevy Tahoe with the funds she set aside in her filming
budget.
The
Church was a few miles back towards the direction of the airport. She planned
on getting a few shots of the Church and some forestry snapshots before making
her way back to the airport to pick up Susan, her cinematographer and the
assistant director of the film. Nat made her way to the church and pulled into
the lot where 2 other cars were parked. It was still pretty early in the
morning so none of the few tourists had made their way to the attraction just
yet. She grabbed her Cannon camera out of the bag out of the Tahoe. She walked
up to the entrance of the tall building and took a snapshot of the bright green
top. She captured a few pictures of the gorgeous mountain landscape behind the
church as the sun began to roll across.
Nat
walked toward the entrance and the door was unlocked and slightly open. She
walked in and saw two people, a woman about the age of 50, and younger man that
looked like a teenager sitting on opposite pews across the aisle. She walked in
and sat in the back row. There was a large, bronze statue of Mary holding Jesus
after he had been taken down from the cross. The younger boy was staring at the
statue, and the woman had her head bowed. Nat pulled out the picture of her
brother again. She stared at it for long time before putting it back in her
pocket. She wasn’t necessarily a religious woman, but she was spiritual in some
ways. She had hope, She pulled her camera up and took a photograph of the woman
and the boy both still in their position. The shutter of the camera was loud
enough to even startle Nat herself. The woman lifted her head and the boy also
turned around to see who taken their photo. Nat with her eye still in the lens
looked up and gave an “I’m sorry; I didn’t mean to disturb you.” Her phone then
began to vibrate and ring in her pocket, increasing the awkwardness of the
situation. It was Susan who’s plane had just landed at the airport. She walked
out of the church to pick her up.
During
Nat’s drive to the airport she thought about Nathan. He was 7 years older than
her, and basically her best friend. He too had graduated from USC in Forestry
and Wildlife (much to their parents disapproval) and that was one of the
reasons why she chose to attend there instead of Columbia. She remembered when
she last saw him. She was only a junior in high school and he had stopped by their
family house before his trip to Mt. McKinley. He was an active young man, and
they were an active family, so hiking, camping, and rock climbing were common.
He was going with a friend from college, who helping him pay for the trip. He
was planning on being gone for only a week and they wanted to climb to the top
of the mountain. We expected a phone call from him after the week he left had
passed but got nothing. My mother figured he may not have had cell phone
reception in the mountains and that’s why her calls went straight to voicemail.
We received a call four days after their expected return. It was from the
mother of Nathan’s friend. She said she hadn’t heard from her son either and
was worried. Both of our families contacted higher authority to try and located
them and trace their last locations. The furthest we got was footage of them
leaving their hotel the morning they set out for the mountain. It’s been 7
years since that day and Nat still was searching for answers. Searching for
peace.
Nat
arrived at the airport to see that Susan was there and was waiting on a bench
outside. She had her luggage, camera, and looked even more eager to begin
filming than Nat.
“Susan, I’m so
glad to see you,” Nat said.
“Hi Nat! I’m
really looking forward to this project.”
“You ready to go
landscaping this place?” Nat asked.
“Let’s hit the
road,” Susan said.
I really like how you incorporated the religious statue and moment of reflection with her brother! I think it added some heart to the story that we haven't gotten yet.
ReplyDeleteIt's good that you incorporated the information about her brother- that gives future writers a lot to work with, and could serve as a jumping off point for what the movie will be about.
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ReplyDeleteI liked your detail about the church. I had a clear picture in my head of it. I also like the information about her brother, it gives us something to work off of.
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ReplyDeleteI liked the placement of the church. Really good idea to incorporate future filming there.
ReplyDeleteGood chapter. My only gripe would be that the proper term is "location scouting", not landscaping, but that's totally fine. I love the church imagery.
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